Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Norton's hut

The snow looked as freezing as the antarctic ocean,
The pitch white snow gliding down as soft as a fluffy jacket,
The dead still trees all around,
The snow was as cold as a freezer,
An old hut in the middle of nowhere. 

1 comment:

Karrie Jamieson said...

Hey Ben,
What a great poem and good use of similes.

Well done also on a fantastic effort in the athletic sports! We are all so proud of you! xo Mum