Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Diamond Smuggling!


On Monday night at 7:00 till 9:00 we went Diamond Smuggling.
Everyone was involved.

We got a Diamond from Mr Norton.
Then we ran through the river. And I fell in!

It was frezzing cold!!!!
I ran past 3 pearents.

Group B won by 2 points.
Then we went back to camp.
I was even more colder!!!!!!

I really enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!

The End
By Carina








4 comments:

Unknown said...

Feedback from the Tech Wizards:

You introduced your story really well.

Bayley

Unknown said...

Feedback from the Tech Wizards:

You used colours which made it stand out and made it more interesting.

Olivia

Unknown said...

Feedback from the Tech Wizards:

You explained what Diamond Smuggling is really well.

John

Karrie Jamieson said...

The Diamond smuggling was so much fun!! I really enjoyed hiding in the trees then totally taking everyone by surprise and stealing their diamonds!! It was so much fun!
Miss J